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Short Story 1

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One small part of our classroom library.

It's time to do our part to advance the base of literature available for future readers to enjoy! It's one thing to read and understand amazing stories; it's another thing entirely to create an amazing story.

​During these three mini-units, students will work to create and refine a traditional, short story, a free-verse poem, and a creative, technology-enhanced dialogue (they'll tell a story through a text stream, Twitter whatever, or Instagram story.) 

Short Stories: Planning

Our first creative writing mini-unit will center around traditional, short stories. Students will use a plot structure chart, and some mrkarpie.com exclusive, original tools to create an amazing 3-5 page story. This first week is dedicated entirely to developing the skills necessary to produce a well-written story. We'll look at conflict, "showing" vs. "telling," characterization, setting, and imagery while simultaneously refining our story ideas through daily, individualized teacher feedback.

Lesson Plans

Materials

Monday, 11/28/2022 - Structured Conflict Selection
The biggest mistake that students make when writing a short story is to select a conflict that is too big to reasonably solve in 3-5 pages. They always want to write epic battles between good and evil, or long romances that cover everything from meeting as 8th-grade sweethearts through 28 year old honeymooners. They want to write about the 50 years of horror that caused a haunted house to be infamous. Today, we'll start with a Peardeck-enhanced slideshow that will offer writing samples that are appropriately developed, versus writing samples that are underdeveloped, and also conflict options that are too big, too small, and just "write." Hahaha. Writing pun intended. Afterwards, students will be asked to submit an idea for a conflict they want to solve during their short story.
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NextGen Learning Standards: 8R5, 8R9, 8W3, 8W4
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Tuesday, 11/29/2022 - I "Sort" of Understand Plot Structure...
This week is all about the plot! Students today will use what we call a plot structure "mix-n-match" tool to build some possible story ideas and to reaffirm the importance of a story centering around a strong, central conflict. Once they've built some stories, they'll jump over to Jamboard, where they'll organize a series of post-it notes onto a plot structure chart to practice the prerequisite skills necessary before writing a story of their own.
Video Directions
NextGen Learning Standards: 8R2, 8R3, 8W3, 8W4
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Plot Structure - Student Practice
Student Practice - ENL
SPED Practice 1
SPED Practice 2
Wednesday, 11/30/2022 - IXL Practice: Punctuating Dialogue
Dialogue is the biggest stumbling block in short story punctuation. Without correctly punctuated dialogue, it's impossible to tell what is happening. Students will practice punctuating dialogue today using IXL software!
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Thursday, 12/1/2022 - Pixar and Plot Structure
Over the last few short story units, I've realized that writing down our story plans on our plot structure charts caused some problems, because students wanted to copy and paste those ideas into a story like they could with our essay connection tools. 
Video Directions
​NextGen Learning Standards: 8R2, 8R3, 8W3, 8W4
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Friday, 12/2/2022 - Flipgrid Story Planning
Today's goal is to ensure that students have something to write on Monday. When we start out on Monday, everyone should be able to write like champions. This year, we're trying something different. Students will just "tell" their story using Flipgrid! That way, when it's time to write them, the inclination to copy and paste doesn't exist.
Video Directions
​NextGen Learning Standards: 8W3, 8W4
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Short Stories Writing Project

Now that we've learned how to produce great writing, and we've refined our story ideas together to ensure well-written short stories, it's time to write! This week will be comprised of structure writing days, with a self-assessment protocol so that both teachers and students can track our progress towards finishing our amazing, short stories by Friday.

Story Description

Students will organize and write a 3-5 page short story that effectively  incorporates multiple elements of literature. They can choose any topic they want, whether it's invading aliens or the thrill of a first kiss. The trick will be to advance the action at a step-by-step pace, and to create amazing, high-quality prose.

Success Skills

Intentionally organize and write a narrative text.
[W8.3a, W8.3b, W8.3c, W8.3d, W8.3e]
Produce and revise clear writing that is free of errors.
[W8.4, W8.5, W8.6]

Story Writing Timeline

Day 1

Monday, 12/5/2022

Day 2-3

Tuesday, 12/6/2022 &
​Wednesday, 12/7/2022

Day 4

Thursday, 12/8/2022

Day 5

Friday, 12/9/2022
Today, students are expected to write their exposition and to establish their conflict. By the end of today, their readers should know what problem will occur in the story, where it will happen, and should know something about the characters that are going to work to solve the conflict.
These two days are all about that rising action! These are the days that produce the "meat" of the story. Students will write ferociously to capture events and choices that propel the action forward, situations that reveal information about their characters, and otherwise use the elements we studied last week to build up to their climax.
Climax Day! Today, students' conflicts should come to a head. Their characters should come together to finally confront the main conflict of the story, whether that conflict involves outrunning to last defender on the basketball court to score the game-winning layup, or finally, abashedly asking out the girl our main character has had a crush on throughout the whole story.
For the final day of story writing, students will "wrap up all the lose ends" of their story into a nice conclusion (or maybe an intentional cliffhanger) Ideally, they'll leave a few minutes to proofread, edit, and improve their writing before turning it in!
*Each day will end with a quick, three minute progress tracking checklist activity to ensure that students are all on the same page (and day) and making adequate progress towards their goal.

Story Materials

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Plot Structure Chart Graphic Organizer

Download a copy of this plot structure chart (you probably know it as "the witches hat" if you're under fifteen years old) to organize a creative story.  Don't forget, when writing a story, the plot moves forward step by step, not by giant leaps.
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Story Assignment Page with Outline

This is an incredibly basic template created mostly for the purposes of creating a Google Classroom assignment. The top of the story page has a few reminders about the skills and expectations of the short story unit, but really, it's an intentionally blank canvas upon which students can paint with words!
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Story Checklist and Progress Monitoring

Progress monitoring has many purposes. At this point in the year, the hope is that students will be able to monitor their own progress, and reflect upon the quality of their own writing. This tool includes both what should be done and how it should be done with an all-important evidence-based component, and a side dish of student-teacher conferencing.
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Short Story Rubric

To maintain the integrity of our writing grades and data, I created a new version of the NYS 4-point rubric that is more conducive to assessing the quality of a short story. While the point values are the same, and there is still the general expectation that level three is "at grade level" and level four is "above," everything else has been modified to be short-story specific.
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Writing Tools Page

The goal of every successful ELA classroom is to help students develop into the best possible writers that they can become. The tools below are what we use in my classroom to help students on the road to above grade level writing and beyond. 
Anysia and Jazmyn take a break from writing their amazing stories to pose for this picture.

Reader's / Writer's Workshop

After all the hard work and dedication that students put into their stories, it seemed a shame to simply grade them on Google Classroom, go over a few exemplars of each grade point, and call it a day. Besides, the point of short stories isn't really to evaluate them, it's to ENJOY READING THEM. This week, we'll start by reading a selection of student-created stories together to model how our readers workshop will function, and how to use a new and unfamiliar tool which could easily go wrong. Then, for the next few days, students will spend some time reading and responding to each other's stories.
Monday, 12/13/2022 Peer Editing
There are a few, very-easy mistakes that students make over and over again that cause them to lost points on the "command of conventions" portion of our rubric. Sometimes, their basic editing mistakes even make the rest of their writing so difficult to understand that the loss of points spirals into other portions of the rubric. (It's difficult to write effective dialogue without effective punctuation. Even the best "showing" descriptions are virtually unintelligible when students don't use a single punctuation mark in an entire page of writing.) Today, students will first read their own stories and apply the "editing checklist" linked to the right. More importantly students will read and edit the stories of two other students, hoping to avoid any points lost for simple, editing mistakes.
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Peer Review Process
Workshop: Modelling Tuesday, 12/14/2022
All of our work to date has been viewed through a microscopic lens, and based in the unerringly accurate world of evidence-based claims. There has been an obvious right and wrong. With short stories, and creative writing in general, the writing is intended to entertain, so looking at it factually, critically, and for evaluation matters less than just enjoying the experience of reading. Today, we'll model how to read, "evaluate," and use our Workshop Form appropriately. We'll also highlight a bunch of our students' amazing stories.
Video Directions
Student Exemplars
Workshop Form
Workshop: Thursday, 12/15/2022 & Friday, 12/16/2022
Students will spend the entirety of today's class in silence. They'll be nestled deeply in the tomes of their classmate's writing. They'll respond to the writing using the methods we modelled and practiced yesterday. 
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2020 Short Story Anthology
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2020 Historias en Espanol
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